As Tonya looked over the side of the car on the Ferris Wheel, she noticed her husband arrive at the carnival. She felt her heart rate accelerate as she realized she might run into him before she and Tom could exit the carnival. She hoped he would head to the children’s rides section first, away from them.
He probably assumed that she and the kids were here for the night. He must have left work early tonight and decided to surprise them since they weren’t home right now. She hadn’t told him that she left the kids with her sister.
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Tessa–
Advocate for mental health and invisible illnesses
My name is Tessa Dean and I am an author and blogger. My writing styles vary and I love writing using prompts.
I am also writing my first book, a Memoir entitled "Government Property - A Memoir of a Military Wife". This is being published on the blog rather than the traditional way. I am putting up chapters as I go along. I keep my blog filled with useful content, stories, and poems. Plenty to keep you busy. I have also been interviewed by blogs and had other posts published on many different blogs. I also wrote a series of articles on Bipolar Disorder for IBPF (International Bipolar Foundation).
I am in my 60’s and disabled which allows me plenty of time to write to my heart’s content.
I live in southern New Jersey and have 3 children and 5 grandchildren. My oldest grandchild is a Sargent in the United States Marine Corps.
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Pretty sure she’ll be found out later anyway when the kids don’t have anything to say about the carnival… It seems like there’s a lot of backstory here!
She’s a casual cheater, the worst kind 😦 I’d be quaking in my boots getting stuck on the ferris wheel with another man and my husband at the bottom waiting.
Oops
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Uh oh… these things always end up being found out.
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You are right. But that doesn’t stop people from doing it anyhow.
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This is true. Human nature and all that.
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Naughty. But the kids would tell Daddy that Mommy never took them to the carnival so she’s busted anyway.
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Yep she sure is! She didn’t think that through.
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Oops. Maybe she should hide behind the lion mask 🙂
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She’ll be lucky to get out of there sight unseen.
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Dear Tessa,
This doesn’t bode well.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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No it doesn’t bode well at all. I am in my dark mood lately.
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Tangled webs and all that. A good read, Tessa; wonder how it’s going to go for them!
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Those situations never work out in the long run.
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How long can Tonya keeps this deceit up. It is human follies that make interesting stories, like this.
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As several people pointed out to me, the kids would tell daddy that mommy never took them to the carnival as it is sure to come up.
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There is always a flaw to deceitful plans….
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Pretty sure she’ll be found out later anyway when the kids don’t have anything to say about the carnival… It seems like there’s a lot of backstory here!
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Yeah it’s hard when you are limited to 100 words to get a complete story in.
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So true! I think the backstory that I sense sprinkled throughout makes the story richer.
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It amazes me how several different people will get a different feeling out of the same prompt.
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She’s a casual cheater, the worst kind 😦 I’d be quaking in my boots getting stuck on the ferris wheel with another man and my husband at the bottom waiting.
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Quite a nightmare situation. No escape for the wicked. 🙂
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🙂
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She’s in trouble now. I hope this doesn’t become violent.
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This is going to get very messy…. Cheats never prosper…as the old saying goes.
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Yes they usually don’t work out well and the woman usually ends up with a broken heart because the man rarely leaves his wife for the other woman.
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Naughty Tony, I hope she gets caught. A well-woven tale.
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Thank you!
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